Taking into account the issues that I've already covered in my last post I've gone back and given my essay some more working looking at the areas raised by my tutor, am I now happier with how the whole thing feel I'd say yes although I was happy with the first draft so does that really tell me anything? One issue that I've had a second opinion on was the final part of my essay that my tutor thought felt a little note form ish, after having someone else look at it (because I didn't think it was that bad) I've made some adjustments but I haven't gone for a full rewrite as made my tutor felt it needed. I'm really happy about the amount of detail I've managed to get into the piece, I feel it gives a good full broad view on the subject hopefully giving me a good starting point for my own work. I know its no Shakespearean work of written brilliance but I'm a photographer not a writer so I've done the one thing that I can do and that represent the facts as I see them in the best way possible. Draw your own conclusions from it but here's hoping its not the worst you've ever read.
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